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Fade by ~swordsgirl:iconswordsgirl:

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Her face stung in my memory
As my ship took me far away
Into the seas of my far black galaxy.

And forever would I see
Only that memory of her smile.
Until it slowly fades,

Just as stars always do.
©2006-2009 ~swordsgirl
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my friend raven was asking me about a poem she had to write for school, and after brainstorming with myself this is what i got.

i normally hate my writing and never post, but i like this one actually. sometimes i vaguely feel this way, but it's not really based off of my feelings too much. it's more of a concept i had.

okay big description that's longer then the poem and doesn't matter much, over.

i swear i'll post more stuff *cry* i'm so lazyyyy ; 3;

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~AndromedaCBlack Dec 6, 2006, 7:26:52 PM
I rather like this >> I like your poetry. It flows~

I'm not sure how to comment D: it's just so complete and...nice.

I LIKE THE LANTERN AS THE PREVIEW IMAGE. There. Bizarre comment entered. Done now D:

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[02:17] SOAPYPOPSICLE: >8| D'AAAAAAAAAW
[02:17] SOAPYPOPSICLE: that is batman
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~swordsgirl Dec 7, 2006, 11:27:37 AM
WHYY thank ya : DDDD

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hello jello : D
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~angelofscreams96 Dec 7, 2006, 1:45:20 PM
it reminds me of that picture you made with that girl person adn that guy person and a ship. o.o It had to do wiht a story that you started or soemthing. It reminds of that. ^_^ And now, since i hath been inspired by yuor lovely poetry, i shall write some of my own.

Johnny was a little lech
A woman's what he longed to catch
But dumbass johnny had no game
and so his status of 'single' remained the same
But then Barb came into his life
And wanted to become his wife
Johnny freaked and ran away
And now Barb spends her everyday
Plotting idiot Johnny's death
To watch him take is one last breathe
She longs to grasp his neck and squeeze
And listen to dumb Johnny weeze
And once she's caught him in her web
She'll be sure to make him dead
And Johnny lives in Missouri
And wallows in his misery
For to hide from her he did something dumb
Just to avoid having to succumb
to Barb's torture
to his pride it was a scrocher
But he just had to give it a whirl
and now he is, permanetly, a girl.
When barb finds him, what will she do?
will some traumatizing lesbian action, soon ensue?
Will she try to kill him, like she's planned ?
Lesbian/transvestite love will he demand?
Who knows?
Who cares?
For certainly not me!
So maybe you will have to wait...and see...

TADA!!!! ^_^ i love it. lmao

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AngelOfScreams96: tea sex
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AngelOfScreams96: ill make it work
AngelOfScreams96: one day
AngelOfScreams96: HAHHAHA
crimsonxxxwolf: we SHALL
AngelOfScreams96: uuuh
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~angelofscreams96 Dec 7, 2006, 1:52:15 PM
*to make him very dead

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AngelOfScreams96: tea sex
crimsonxxxwolf: yeaa
crimsonxxxwolf: hahaha
AngelOfScreams96: ill make it work
AngelOfScreams96: one day
AngelOfScreams96: HAHHAHA
crimsonxxxwolf: we SHALL
AngelOfScreams96: uuuh
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